Had thoughts of really digging into drum programming, but I had read something that said to start with just a cymbal. So I did just that.

The singing needs work, but I think I am starting to get the feel I want. Layering some background vocals with the new “Oooh, ooh” part will be nice – I think. And I’m pleased with the “Stop, stop your quiet” line I added to the chorus.

I also reintroduced the bridge/chord-change & tried out a couple of lyric ideas (though I sang “yet” as “wet”). I’m thinking this song could segue nicely into “What Say You” on the album.

There’s a couple of ugly cut & paste splices, but I think you’ll get “the gist.”

I’ve tinkered with this website a bit – adding my Album Reviews and Music pages. I’m thinking of adding “Links” and “Contact” or similar.

-FoolEd Again