I got a suggestion from someone who is not only a  dear friend, but whose musical knowledge I admire and critical discernment I value . He noted that “the joy of a solo project is to not give a crap about what other people say.”

I decided to create a solo album, but I also decided to share the process. By doing so, I’ve invited input. Comments, suggestions, criticism (hopefully constructive) and questions are welcome.

The suggestion is to slow the tempo of Regular Folk to a “more waltz like vibe.” Noting that the “model for [him] is an old Greg Brown song, Tennessee Waltz.” I found only “The Iowa Waltz” on YouTube (I did see that he does a cover of Jesse Winchester’s Brand New Tennessee Waltz). I think I get the idea. He heard me stumbling and struggling to get the lyrics in on the second sketch version. I am considering the suggestion and also not ruling out the possibility of creating two versions.

In listening to the mix of that second sketch version on my stereo, I really heard the difference from the headphone version. I felt the mbira (thumb piano) was way too high in the mix and the didgeridoo was almost unheard. On my headphones the mix was fine. Here it is remixed:

I also came up with lyrical bits and pieces for a new song (no tune yet) while lying in bed this morning and, since I’m sharing the whole process, they are included below in their disjointed state.

Thanks for your attention, feedback & support.

-Ed “Not Island” Bejzak

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Dangerous/privileged (possible titles)

I’m having trouble understanding
Protect yourself

Your Gun, right?
At a christening, now at a wake
It can only escalate
Defuse the situation

Concealed from all

Your god, right?
Insulated/isolated/incarcerated
Paralyzed
Can I hurt your god
Destroy your faith
Do you have any doubt?

How does/could it affect you
Fear
Been scared
Been scarred
Beggar/thief
There for the Asking
There for the taking

My point is privilege
I’m speaking from it
I’m talking to it
Borrowed
Asked for help

People get shot/assaulted
You/your might
Violence the solution
Never truly [re]solved a problem
Negated

Lost my religion
Found my humanity

Who profits from peace?
Prophet[ic]
Peace profiteering

What are you scared of?
What are you afraid to do?