I posted a remixed/trimmed version of the “Can We Talk” demo to Soundcloud earlier in the week (link below). The best sounding one I’ve done so far? I like it most on headphones & in the car. On the home stereo, some of the vocal imperfections seem highlighted.
Can We Talk (Demo – Talk 2)
I have a couple of ideas for the 13th and , I think, final demo for this project.
Working titles are
1. Absent Mind
2. My Logic
“My Logic” is the lighter, in lyrical tone/theme, and the one towards which I’m leaning. I’ve included the initial lyric below. Current thought for feel is a punky/new wave feel. This one came to mind:
We’ll see.
-Punky “Brewster” Eddows
https://m.facebook.com/punkymeadowsofficial/
My Logic
I’ve accounted for all the variables
If I value your input
Then we’re equals
Maybe you’re greater
Or I’m the lesser of evils
While You have class
Do I/we
I got here in error
This endless loop
A bit of you
Takes a bite out of me
Instantiate
(Un)Eventful
Compile the data
Compute the odds
Funny to see “instantiate”. I had that word in my head many moons ago and could not find a way to work it into a song
Great minds? Reminds me of an XTC anecdote – what doesn’t – where Andy always wanted to get “porpoise” into a song. He finally accomplished it by pronouncing it poor-poizz in “Across This Antheap” https://youtu.be/Od6GGgKFEXM